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Retrospective ICP 1 review (kanban t_03b62410) found the EN page made a non-technical owner-operator hesitate: the offer sat behind four blocks of shell commands, the hero ended on "a developer", one hero line carried an untraced claim, there was no route to a number, the FAQ printed the OpenUpgrade data-loss warning against our own fresh-database service, and the "restaurant meal" simile was unitless. R1 move "The ODOO4projects way" above the process and the commands; swap the two band classes so the page still alternates; keep the offer's code cards legible on the dark band; reword the §5 intro and §6 opening sentence. R2 hero subhead reworded, dropping the untraced "costs you your history". R3 "See the plans" route added inside §6, with the honest "not priced on that page" clause. No price, no plan hero, no Offer node. R4 FAQ "What happens to my history…" answer rewritten (JSON-LD acceptedAnswer kept verbatim-equal to the visible text). R5 "restaurant meal" clause deleted. Band-aware text colours added for the elements the class swap re-parented (process list on light, technical section and its notes on dark, the §6 link). No other content changed: H1, CTAs, code blocks (all 4 byte-identical), Sweat Equity, the 8 FAQs and the JSON-LD shape are untouched.