Retrospective ICP 1 review (kanban t_03b62410) found the EN page made a
non-technical owner-operator hesitate: the offer sat behind four blocks of
shell commands, the hero ended on "a developer", one hero line carried an
untraced claim, there was no route to a number, the FAQ printed the
OpenUpgrade data-loss warning against our own fresh-database service, and
the "restaurant meal" simile was unitless.
R1 move "The ODOO4projects way" above the process and the commands; swap the
two band classes so the page still alternates; keep the offer's code cards
legible on the dark band; reword the §5 intro and §6 opening sentence.
R2 hero subhead reworded, dropping the untraced "costs you your history".
R3 "See the plans" route added inside §6, with the honest "not priced on that
page" clause. No price, no plan hero, no Offer node.
R4 FAQ "What happens to my history…" answer rewritten (JSON-LD acceptedAnswer
kept verbatim-equal to the visible text).
R5 "restaurant meal" clause deleted.
Band-aware text colours added for the elements the class swap re-parented
(process list on light, technical section and its notes on dark, the §6 link).
No other content changed: H1, CTAs, code blocks (all 4 byte-identical),
Sweat Equity, the 8 FAQs and the JSON-LD shape are untouched.
New EN landing page for the head term "ODOO Community Upgrade": hero, what an
upgrade is, the 10-step published process, a developer-labelled technical section
with four sourced command blocks and their substitution notes, the ODOO4projects
migration service (new database on our servers), the self-hosting cost honesty
section, an 8-question FAQ and a final CTA. House CI only, page-scoped CSS, no
new blocking resources.
- CTAs are plain links to the real flows: /support.html#contact (opens the
migration ticket) and /index.html#pricing. No basket POST and no product id:
no price is published for the migration service, so wiring a buy would invent one.
- JSON-LD: WebPage + Service + FAQPage (8 questions), no Offer node.
- sitemap.xml: new URL added; llms.txt: page listed under Key pages.
- support.html: the "older version" FAQ answer now links the new page so it is not orphaned.
Copy: copywriter/out/odoo-community-upgrade-page-copy-2026-10-27.md. The 7
NOT PUBLISHED gaps (G1-G7) are not in the build.
oliver
webmaster